Hi everyone thank for reading, I need some feedback about my game including a game trailer, poster, and steam page... 
First It is the main capsule of the game, I designed it minimal but eye-catching it will be shown onsteam the Steam store page, I also design a game text logo for the game
this is also my trailer for the game, I need some feedback on it from you What do you think I need to improve
Finally, I need some feedback about some changes I made to my Steam page description below (I copied it so you don't have to go to the link):
S H A P E
Minimalism style - Minimalism design room in 2D view.
Classisc platformer - Classic 2D platformer style.
Take word - Take the word of the NPC
Connect word mechanism - change the rule of the game by connecting different words.
Facing your fears - you may be gonna lost focus and have dementia.
Shape: Mind of Thinker tells the story of a negative thinker stuck inside his/her state of mind.
Everything in the state of Mind is not normal. Sometimes a text, a shape, it even has rain inside.
The thinker realizes they are stuck inside the room where objects become text-like from BOX to their thought.
Game Features
- Classic platformer
- Minimalism design
- Solve puzzle
- Connect word mechanism
- All things in your Mind are words even BOXES
Thank you for reading I hope you can share what you thought and give me some feedback
For contact: brightstdio@gmail.com
Mygame: steam
