Started painting story for beams news

Hi @ll,
I prepare something like a quick and dirty story in 5 pictures / scenes maximum.
The idea is basic, my 2D knowlege too, but i have to keep things simple..
I started sketching today and finished scene 1/5
Here are some sketches and the progress to final 1/5

First sketch (lol) ^^


Next steps..


Last step before final 1/5.


This is the final result for 1/5, what do you think?


I use Krita for paint Krita.org , my most loved painting freeware ever (so far)..


Kind regards Stefan :)