Comments - Levi3088

I'm waiting for four things in life; The Elder Scrolls 6, Half-Life 3, a girl that likes me and Lament. Neither of which are likely to appear in the near future. :P

This looks absolutely amazing! Can't wait. Any idea on the realise date?

I agree with KrustiClawn. Well done on the interior level design but I think that the exterior level design could use some work. Overall, good job. Also if you need any ideas for the story or help with grammar, feel free to ask me and I will help you out 100% free-of-charge, all I would expect is a place in the end credits.

Excellent level design on this photo, well done.

This will be the description of the Custom Story when it is created:
The year is 1856, you play as the wealthy industrialist Charles Stapleton. You lived a happy life, with a grand estate, a wife and a child. You had it all, until you didn’t…

“For I envied the arrogant when I saw the prosperity of the wicked. They have no struggles; their bodies are healthy and strong. They are free from the burdens common to man; they are not plagued by human ills. Therefore pride is their necklace; they clothe themselves with violence. From their callous hearts comes iniquity the evil conceits of their minds know no limits. They scoff and speak with malice; in their arrogance they threaten oppression. They mouths lay claim to heaven, and their tongues take possession of the earth” - Psalms 73:3-8

The year is 1856, you play as the wealthy industrialist Charles Stapleton. You lived a happy life, with a grand estate, a wife and a child. You had it all, until you didn’t…

“For I envied the arrogant when I saw the prosperity of the wicked. They have no struggles; their bodies are healthy and strong. They are free from the burdens common to man; they are not plagued by human ills. Therefore pride is their necklace; they clothe themselves with violence. From their callous hearts comes iniquity the evil conceits of their minds know no limits. They scoff and speak with malice; in their arrogance they threaten oppression. They mouths lay claim to heaven, and their tongues take possession of the earth” - Psalms 73:3-8

(Just a little taster for the story, remember however, if you have the skill to make it, please consider it and reply with your response)

I'm in, that is - if you allow me to think of ideas for the story, character development, etc. rather than to do anything involving coding or level design.

I have an idea for an Amnesia Custom Story, if anyone is interested, just message me and I will tell you the idea, free of charge, however I would request one thing;that may name be listed among the first in the credits as the person who created the story.

I will accept anyone who has made one or more custom stories with a rating of 70% or more, I will also, however, be checking the Custom Story myself for four things:Good level design, good grammar, a good story and professionalism.

If, by any chance, anyone is interested as to why I want someone to make the Custom Story, it is because I am not skilled at level design.

I have an idea for an Amnesia Custom Story, if anyone is interested, just message me and I will tell you the idea, free of charge, however I would request one thing;that may name be listed among the first in the credits as the person who created the story.

I will accept anyone who has made one or more custom stories with a rating of 70% or more, I will also, however, be checking the Custom Story myself for four things:Good level design, good grammar, a good story and professionalism.

If, by any chance, anyone is interested as to why I want someone to make the Custom Story, it is because I am not skilled at level design.

I don't know if you're still active, or even if this story is still being made; but if so, please contact me as soon as you can. The custom story seems great, the level design is very good and I like the general idea of it.

There is one problem, however, the grammar. Whilst, like I said previously, it is a good custom story so far, the grammar is lacking greatly and that is something that I can help you with. I would, of course, do it for free, however, I request that if you allow me to correct your grammar, you put my name in the credits - "Levi Higginson", thank you.

well hopefully not cuz I'm a straight male and there's no soap in Amnesia...

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This game was incredible, remarkable, I would in-fact say. The game started out as many custom stories, you're in a cell. But it was a lot more sophisticated than that after the escaping of said cell, with the puzzles in the Torture Chamber, etc. As the game progressed, so did the story, and it felt like a truly good story created by a team of professionals; not the four or five people mentioned in the credits.

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I began to enjoy the game more towards the Castle area, it was really fun to play. The puzzles were standard, the scares however were really good and the level design was incredible! And then as I progressed more, read the notes such as the one about the priest, I noticed how much thought and care went into the making of this game.

My favourite part, was however, in the chapel with the priest that was talked about in a previously found note. It was an amazing, and unique idea. Sort of like a boss fight in Amnesia. And it terrified me, I don't think a custom story has ever made me that scared before!

And then the ending, the ending which would make Alfred Hitchcock proud. You were insane, it was all part of your insanity, it never happened. And the suitor you managed to trap, was just a regular person, now dead thanks to your brain's irregularities.

I would have preferred an ending which didn't mean hanging, but nevertheless, overall this custom story was absolutely amazing.

I would give this custom story a solid 9/10. For the story, level-design, grammar (Trust me its a big deal for me, seeing as about 80%+ of the custom stories have terrible grammar), the plot twist, the terror this game puts into you, and just about everything.

I hardly dislike anything in this custom story, perhaps if it was a bit longer, but besides that I like pretty much everything in this custom story, and especially considering the small amount of people that made this.

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My over-all impression was that the story was incredible, especially towards the end of the game, it was definitely one of my favourite custom stories, if not, my favourite, which is why I am giving this a remarkable 9/10.

Download UnrarX it's free

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What kind of voice acting do you need? Deep Male Voice, Creepy sounding Female, etc.?

This was a INCREDIBLE Custom Story, it may not be as long as the Dark Descent but it is definitely nearly as awesome, if not as awesome as the Dark Descent. 9.5/10