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g-mp - - 2 comments @ Devil's Journal: Tony T

Oh I see, thanks for clearing that up (and you're welcome ^_^). I was wondering if this was by any chance just a technical demo to just see how the game looks. As you said, having some kind of disclaimer either in the demo or on the game's website(where ever it is the demo is being downloaded from) would help clear the confusion about the demo's true purpose and yes, as long as making another demo doesn't become last minute rush, it would help give your audience a better taste of the visual novel in the future if you do decide to make another.
I wish you and the other devs best of luck :)

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g-mp - - 2 comments @ Devil's Journal: Tony T

[Spoiler alert]

I don't want to be harsh here, but I have a problem with the demo's ending. It ends too oddly if this is the demo that is suppose to sell your visual novel. I think there should be an interesting cliffhanger or at least more information on what's going on in the end scene, which would be much better than having the demo end with the cute girl suddenly going psychotic, killing everyone(including the story's protagonist).While the length of the demo doesn't bother me at all, interacting more with the two girls would have been nice but this could be a just be minor preference.Your finished visual novel may turn great, if not fantastic, but I recommend changing how the demo ending a bit if this is going to be the demo that makes your audience want to buy your visual novel. As for what I liked about the demo, I LOVE the art style! Very impressive artwork.
Hope I was helpful, I'm just giving my honest opinion. I would love to see a game like this make it on Steam and gain interest and popularity among the other indie games. You can also get some feedback there as well.

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