Sorry for trying to lern to create my first custom story, first time scripting, you don't have to ******* hate me becouse of trying to make a custom story. And as i say "It would be awsome to get some feedback on this" is becouse it is my first, and i need to know what i did wrong and right. So thank you for your ****!
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