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FOR THE HORDE... As I like to call it.

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Mr.Noel
Mr.Noel - - 2 comments @ Future Aims

So I'be been thinking about the story line OK and I came up ith some ideas. Robert Cruise (main character) was framed of the death of his wife and 10 year-old son and he was sent to jail but the police called him insane so they sent him to maximum security in a place called Brookefield Asylum so he could be watch on. As he was in the asylum he was having weird dreams of terrible monsters and demons then he told one of the guards that he was seeing things then they gassed him then the power shut down. Then emergency power turned on and the window had blood smeared on the window then he went out and was jumped by guards and was put in a stretcher and harnessed down and them he was put back into his room. Then the lights flickered and the TV that was in his room turned on and it showed on the screen "OBEY ME". Then got out the stretcher and looked around the room... that's all I got so comment on this and change it if you want to but here's the start.

Mr.Noel

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Mr.Noel
Mr.Noel - - 2 comments @ Reaver1

HELLO MY GOOD FRIENDS

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