An origial piece from member of Undertone MtM0201.
It's pretty okay, I think you need to do something about the solo part near the end, the notes just dont fit the melody.
I'm agreed with F-Plus, the end is not that great
Hmmm that melody sounds like something went wrong there a bit. If it was intentional I would ditch it for another melody.
All in all though a really nice track.
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It's pretty okay, I think you need to do something about the solo part near the end, the notes just dont fit the melody.
I'm agreed with F-Plus, the end is not that great
Hmmm that melody sounds like something went wrong there a bit. If it was intentional I would ditch it for another melody.
All in all though a really nice track.