Man... I have no idea if this is still canceled or not, but I found out about all this through your comment on youtube. This looked so good, I'm not a 3d modeler or anything (although I had bad experiences with it) I think seeing what you had so far, it was definitely getting there. This would have been such a great indie game and I'm really ashamed to see that it would probably never be touched again. God do I pray that you find more people to help you on this project because I can really tell that you honestly put so much effort and hard work into this.
As for critique, I think there's some stuff you need to fix up on. Your backgrounds are so beautiful, I even love how your Yoh walks around, runs, summons shikigamis and everything. But you might want to do a little more with the character modeling. Their eyes (both Yoh and Anna's) are way too far apart. Kino's glasses look a little weird too, but overall this is very good. Also, your audio seems really weird at times too. Sometimes it sounds nice but then it skips around pieces throughout the track? I'm not sure if this is because you couldn't find a proper instrumental version of it but that's another thing. I think maybe you should switch tracks whenever Yoh encounters onis too, something that really settles the mood. :)
But anyways, that's only if you are considering in going back to continue this game. I hope seeing this comment brightens your day because you looked so devastated not being able to reach Takei or finding anyone else to help you with this. You deserve all the praise in the world for actually trying to make one of the most emotional arcs from the manga into something you could explore in a 3 dimensional world. If you are still unable to go further, then by all means, I sincerely look forward to seeing you do other stuff in the future. Maybe not Shaman King related, but your own thing y'know?
Take care!!
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