Comments - MA-Simon

Hm... personally not a huge fan of that belly free amor. After all, thats where you would stab at first.

Playing, dressed like a real hipster. Seriously, loose that coat. Playing and music is nice though! :)

Looking good! Nice idea too, glad you keep working with games! :)

Nice work!

Really nice! But way to short & horrible ending.

Very nice!

Very nice.

Great functionality! Unfortunaly the look of the saturated, bright, red menue / logo doesen't go well with the game & art style at all.

Really nice! I love the blur effect & that fish-eye-like camera too, makes it really come alive somehow. Some tiny fireflys & insects missing though. Maybe a dust/pollen like particle-effect?

Love the Game of Thrones "Intro" styled presentation!

Love the lively Landscape.

Venus Demo-Real: Soundcloud.com
Mars Demo-Real: Soundcloud.com

Maybe have a look at Soundirons "Mars" (Russian Male-Choir) and it´s upcomming equivalent "Venus" (Russian Female-Choir). If there is a budget these are a must have to get.
Over at vi-control are some early Venus-Demos: Vi-control.net

Nice! But the ears of that white guy are placed to low, and they are a little bit to small, also the hair needs to reach further intro the face. This will make the face loot less melon-shaped. :)

Hm, i´d make each of them about 50% faster. Feels really slow atm.

YES!

Keep up the awesome work you are doing!
This is already incredible fun to watch :)
(I think i watched all your blog videos so far)

But please: Keept the mature "real-looking" way and don´t go the comical looking way of spore.

Looking very good! But i do hope you change that horribly voice over... there is no statisfaction in that boring moaning of "uoh"´s and "uoh"´s from that girl etc. They shall be screaming in pain! (*um... sorry*)

-> If you are in need of some nice crunchy foley sounds,
Look here: Hissandaroar.com
Mix that up with some of your death sounds and have fun! ;)

I will get this! And the Soundtrack too :)

I like this kind of design! But they really do need hair! :)

I really dig your drawing style!

Maybe its just the shadows which are off. They should be darker, maybe almost black.

Citypictures.org

Hmm... i would up the contast a little. Currently the game looks a bit to gray... It´s in a dessert, the sun should be glowing and hot, even in a fallout world :)

;) The purple windows are kinda off, but the rest looks awesome!

Looking good :)
Remindes me a little of the upcomming Otherland-Online:
Otherland-game.com

Loved the first one. And this one looks even more stunning. You´ll have my money :)

:) Looking really nice and will be an instant buy by me as soon as released.
Kind of hope that you add a little bit more of an living vegetation to the background replacing some of this "death" three like things. (The colour is good, but some leaves and additional plants? Since your concept is "abandoned" shouldnt there be more stuff growing? Looks cleaned up somehow.)
Would be nice if the fireflies and lights would be a little bit mor gloomy too. They seem more like dust right now. (Hence the underwater comment)

(Talking about the Youtube demo)
Some suggestions:
It has some very cool parts! But the first track has to much and to fast "bling-bling" to be of any atmospheric quality.
Slow it dow if you can.
You could also try to add an lowpass filter and modulate the sound a little too.
Look up freesound.org for some decent "free to use"
field recordings.