Rainbow dreams Thread - Visual Novel developers

Rainbow Dreams is a Sorrow and Despair themed visual novel that has a total playtime of 3-4 hours.

Summary:

The protagonist, Luka Sanguis wakes up one morning to see a Beautiful girl with flowing white hair in his bed. Cliche entrance you say?
Thing is this particular girl is not human. No she's not an alien. No she's not anything supernatural. So then what is she?
To remove the technicalities she's God. And this particular God has taken a liking to young Luka. But in leaving her throne in Elysium, the balance of nature tips over and consequences on the world becomes dire.

How will Luka deal with the coming breakdown of reality when the only person who can stop it is always hiding from responsibility?

Characters:

Luka Sanguis- A very handsome young man who is apathetic to most things even though he possesses a genius-level intellect. His apathy was caused by the frequent abuse he suffered from his foster parents during his childhood.

Myra Orbis- A beautiful girl who is supposedly God, but is very playful and carefree. She prefers to hang around Luka all day, rather than manage the world and keep it running. She loves everyone and everything in equal measure and can never be seen without a bright smile on her face, which get's even brighter when she's with Luka.

Bora Sanguis- The foster father of Luka and a very important politician. He is very hardworking and secretly cares for Luka but is unable to show it because of his wife.

Mara Sanguis- The foster mother of Luka and a very prominent woman in the real estate business. She despises Luka because of his great achievements while her son was born with down syndrome of a strange nature.

Tika Sanguis- Luka's younger brother who is disabled and cannot do much on his own. Luka tends to spoil him while their parents are not looking.

Team:

Writing: Dfbreezy
Editing/proofreading: Snailmusk
Programming: Joe B.
Character art: Eccopink
Composing: Lexikins
Interface and Logo: Trey Fletcher
Background art: FalyneVerger

Progress;

Story;
Part one: 75%
Part two: 30%

Art;
sprites:0%
Backgrounds: 0%
CGs: 0%
Gui: 0%

Music: 0%

Programming: 0%

Open Positions:

Japanese translators*
Japanese Voice actors*

*Not actively recruiting

The story itself will be very short if i work on it since there will be a two year time skip which jumps straight to the climax.

the story is currently being worked on and the project would be commercial.

1. Rate the premise on a scale of 1- 10
2. While this may look jovial-ish on the outside there will be deep despair and sorrow. How do you feel about that?
3. What do you think of the plot in general? The plot may seem generic, but i plan to make the story one that will leave deep emotional scars.

Any opinion will be much obliged.