Nomad Fleet is a RTS game for PC, Mac and Linux where you lead the last remnants of Mankind to safety after a mysterious alien race has hunted them near extinction. Lead a fully armed fleet of battleships, carriers and fighters across several random encounters where they must fight for their survival while scavenging for resources, trading and researching new technologies.
Intro (WIP)
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I'm working in the intro of the game and I could use some feedback. I'm no writer nor english native speaker so I imagine the text could use some aditional work.
Yep, some artistic approach would come in hand for this project.
Care to elaborate? if its about getting a 2D artist for the intro that's out of the budget and I don't believe in rev-share.
If its about the writing, I'm getting some collaboration right now to change it.
It's all about how do you serve the plot. Is it intriguing to develop in missions? Or just plot to skip to gameplay?
Depending on that you should build up visual line of intro.