A Walk in the Dark addon

This is the demo to my first custom story. Anyone with around 15 minutes, can you please look at it and give me some comments on how to make it better? The story is currently up in the air and the 2nd map is incomplete as well as following maps. Download: Extract test.7z to custom stories folder in Amnesia>custom_stories

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