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Wander is a collaborative, non-combat, non-competitive game focused on exploration and joy. Life begins as a tree. Storms that affect the known planets transform you, and continue to influence your path. A rare flower has many powers that can alter your course. As you explore, you begin to discover others in the the sprawling rainforest. Working together, you unlock new experiences, piece together the plot and enjoy the varied beauty that Wander has to offer. Wander features a gorgeous landscape, large scale non-competitive play and immersive sound design to create a world like no other.

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Grammar nazi (Games : Wander : Forum : Wander discussion : Grammar nazi) Locked
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Nov 24 2014 Anchor

From the "About" section at Wanderthegame.com, as well as this forum's description:

> Wander is a collaborative, non-combat, non-competitive MMO game focused on narrative, exploration and joy.

Use the serial comma, please.
"narrative, exploration, and joy"

> You begin as a giant tree. Storms that affect the known planets transform you, and continue to influence your path. A rare flower has many powers that can alter your course. Enchanting opera singers guide you.

No comma needed in "transform you and continue to influence your path."

> As you explore, you begin to discover others in the the sprawling rainforest. Working together, you unlock new experiences, piece together the plot and enjoy the varied beauty that Wander has to offer.

Another serial comma here, if you don't mind.
"piece together the plot, and enjoy the varied beauty"

> Wander features a gorgeous landscape, large scale non-competitive play and immersive sound design to create a world like no other.

Missing a dash in "large-scale." And another serial comma before "and immersive" would also be welcome.

Edited by: DonReba

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