Articles - The Source Playable Teaser Alpha

I have a little team called The Fantasy Tales Studio. We're all software developer students. We want to make an exciting Text-Based game just like the old Fighting Fantasy books with some extra. The Source will be a Text-Based/RPG/Open World/Adventure Game. The game will take you to the magical World of Carland where 6 species wars for the mighty "Source". Humans,Rajyad(Geek-like humanoid),Locodan(Snake-like humanoid),Vaerhin(Humans but twice the size),Elderan(Elf-like magicians),Carland(Mighty progenitor species(powered by techologies)). This is the Game's Playable Teaser's Alpha version so there's not too much content in it yet. But i want review/feedback to know that i'm in on the right track with the game.